najpiękniejsze haiku - the most beautiful haikus

bleblin

birds sit on branches
no one sing & no one chirp
white winter’s layer

willie

Try

not one sings & not one chirps (would refer to birds)

or

no one sings & no one chirps (would refer to persons)

Sincerely,
Bill Donovan
Port Charlotte, Florida, USA

bleblin

I'd like to thank you very much. It's my mistake. "Persons" are not welcome in our haikus. All has to refer to nature.
So once again:

birds sit on branches
not one sings & not one chirps
white winter’s layer

Tatiana · Wysłany: Pon 22:54, 05 Mar 2007 Temat postu: fox

muddy path, byway
fox in midst of tall forest
lull before storm light

Jemall

mature tomatoes
children in the garden
seeds' fireworks

Greta

birds sit on branches
no one sing & no one chirp
white winter’s layer
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Saszka

An old silent pond...

A frog jumps into the pond,

splash! Silence again.

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Saszka

Light of the moon

Moves west, flowers' shadows

Creep eastward.

In the moonlight,

The color and scent of the wisteria

Seems far away.

Saszka

Everything I touch

with tenderness, alas,

pricks like a bramble.

Basienka

Light of the moon

Moves west, flowers' shadows

Creep eastward.

Basienka

I walk across sand

And find myself blistering

In the upał, upał heat

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