najpiękniejsze haiku - the most beautiful haikus

Olda · Wysłany: Śro 17:40, 07 Mar 2007 Temat postu: Circle of life

Beauty, tears and smiles
came by changing history
loneliness of lives.

bleblin · Wysłany: Śro 22:15, 07 Mar 2007 Temat postu: try again

it's quite a nice poem but we prefer here the most strictest haikus. We would like to share in creating such a simple form and the most formest haiku. I've written:"Avoid all reference to yourself in the haiku
-To the point ( nature in account ), a man as a subject is unacceptable; no history of your life (no pronouns),consent to one part of your body". Try it again. And welcome, Olda.
And the section for English haikus is below. :P